Wednesday, 3 February 2016

ACCURATE WRITING: ERROR CORRECTION

Read this composition, which contains one grammar or vocabulary error in each sentence. WHAT JOB DO YOU THINK YOU'D BE GOOD AT AND WHY? 1)I often thought about what kind of job I would like to do after I leave school. 2) In the past, I'm used to want to be a doctor like my mother. 3)When, after thinking about this more deeply, I changed my mind. 4) Now that I'm eighteen, I decided what I should do. 5) I want to be firefighter. 6) I think I'd be good in this job for many reasons. 7) Firstly, I like sports and physical education and I used to doing a lot of physical exercise every day. 8) I'm also quite sensitive in dangerous situations and my teachers say I'm a reliable person. 9) I've also decided that I don't want work indoors like my mother. 10) I would prefer to work outside because it's more interested. 11) I also don't mind if I don't win a lot of money, like a doctor does. 12) To sum up, I'm really looking forward to become a firefighter. 13) You need to be working-hard but I'm prepared for this. 14) Sometimes it will be a dangerous job, and I am ready for that challenge. 15) I know that the training is taking a long time but it will be worth it.

20 comments:

Clàudia Trigo said...

I often think about what kind of job I would like to do after I leave school. In the past, I used to want to be a doctor like my mother. Then, after thinking about this more deeply, I changed my mind. Now that I’m eighteen, I have decided what I should do. I want to be a firefighter.
I think I would be good at this job. Firstly, I like spots and physical education and I’m used to doing a lot of physical exercise every day. I’m also quite sensible in dangerous situations and my teacher’s say I’m a reliable person. I’ve also decided that I don’t want to work indoors like my mother. I would prefer to work outside because it’s more interesting. I also don’t mind if I don’t earn a lot of money, like a doctor does!
To sum up, I’m really looking forward to becoming a firefighter. You need to be hard-working but I’m prepared for this. Sometimes it will be a dangerous jo, but I’m ready for that challenge. I know that the training will take a long time but it will be worth it.

Ivette & Clàudia

Alberto baeza martinez said...

I often think about what kind of job I would like to do after I leave school. In the past, I used to want to be a doctor like my mother. After thinking about this more deeply, I changed my mind. Now that I'm eighteen, I've decided what to do. I want to be a firefighter.

I think I'd be good at this job for many reasons. Firstly, I like sports and physical education and I'm used to doing a lot of physical exercise every day. I'm also quite sensitive in dangerous situations and my teachers says I'm a reliable person. I've also decided that I don't want to work indoors like my mother. I would prefer to work outside because it's more interesting. I also don't mind if I don't earn a lot of money, like aa doctor does!

To sup up, I'm really looking forward to becoming a firefighter. You need to be hard-working but I'm prepared for this. Sometimes it will be a dangerous job, but I am ready for that challenge. I know that the training will take a long time but it will be worth it.

Albert Soto and Jorge Gemas said...

I often think about what kind of job I would like to do after I leave school. In the past, I used to want to be a doctor like my mother. Then, after thinking about this more deeply, I changed my mind. Now that I am eighteen, I have decided what I should do. I want to be a firefighter.

I think I'd be good at this job for many reasons. Firstly, I like sports and physical education and I used to do a lot of physical exercices every day. I'm also quite sensible in dangerous situations and my teachers say I'm a reliable person. I've also decided that I don't wont to work indoors like my mother. I would prefer to work outside because it's more interesting. I also don't mind if I don't earn a lot of money, like a doctor does!

To sum up, I'm really looking forward to becoming a firefighter. You need to be hard-working but I'm prepared for this. Sometimes it will be a dangerous job, but I'm ready for that change. I know that the training will take a long time but it will be worth it.

Bernat bloc said...
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English said...

I often think about what kind of job I would like to do after I leave school. In the past, I used to want to be a doctor like my mother. After thinking about this more deeply, I changed my mind. Now that I'm eighteen, I have decided what I should do. I want to be a firefighter.

I think that I'd be good at this job for many reasons. Also, I like sportsand physical education and I used to doing a lot of physical exercise every day. I'm also quite sensible in dangerous situations and my teachers say I'm a reliable person. I've also decided that don't want to work indoors like my mother. I would prefer to work outside because it's more interesting. I also don't mind if don't earn a lot of money, like a doctor does!

To sum up, I'm really looking forward to becoming a firefighter. You need to be hard-working but I'm prepared for this. Sometimes it will be a dangerous job, but I'm ready for that challenge. I know that the training will take a long time but it will be worth it.

Lluís Salvador said...

I often think about what kind of job I would like to do after I leave school. In the past, I used to want to be a doctor like my mother. After thinking about this, more deeply, I changed my mind. Now that I'm eighteen, I've decided what I should do. I want to be a firefighter.
I think I'd be good at this job for many reasons. Firstly, I like sports and physical education and I used to do a lot of physical exercise every day. I'm also quite sensible in dangerous situations and my teachers say I'm a reliable person. I also quite decided that I don't want to work indoors like my mother. I would prefer to work outside because it's more interesting. I also don't mind I don't earn a lot of money, like a doctor does!
To sum up, I'm really looking forward to becoming a firefighter. You need to be a hard-worker but I'm prepared for this. Sometimes it will be a dangerous job but I'm ready for that challenge. I know that the training is going to take a long time but it will be worth it.

Jan said...

I often think about what kind of job I would like to do after I leave shcool. In the past, I used to want to be a doctor like my mother. Then, after thinking about this more deeply, I changed my mind. Now that I'm eighteen, I've decided what I should do. I want to be a firefighter.
I think I'd be good at this job for many reasons. Firstly, I like sports and physical education, and I used to do a lot of physical exercice every day. I'm also quite sensible in dangerous situations and my teacher say I'm a reliable person. I've also decided that I don't want to work indoors like my mother. I would prefer to work outside, because it's more interesting. I also don't mind if I don't earn a lot of money, like a doctor does!
To sum up, I'm really looking forward to becoming a firefighter. You need to be a hard-worker but I'm prepared for this. Sometimes it will be a dangerous job, but I am ready for that challenge. I know that the training is going to take a long time but it will be worth it.

Bernat bloc said...

I often think about what kind of job I would like to do after I leave school. In the past, I used to want to be a doctor like my mother. Then, after thinking about this more deeply, I changed my mind. Now that I am eighteen, I have decided what I should do. I want to be a firefighter.

I think I'd be good at this job for many reasons. Firstly, I like sports and physical education and I used to do a lot of physical exercices every day. I'm also quite sensible in dangerous situations and my teachers say I'm a reliable person. I've also decided that I don't wont to work indoors like my mother. I would prefer to work outside because it's more interesting. I also don't mind if I don't earn a lot of money, like a doctor does!

To sum up, I'm really looking forward to becoming a firefighter. You need to be hard-working but I'm prepared for this. Sometimes it will be a dangerous job, but I'm ready for that change. I know that the training will take a long time but it will be worth it.

Bernat and Joan G.

Oscar said...

I often think about what kind of job I would like to do after I leave school. In the past, I used to want to be a doctor like my mother. Then, after thinking about this more deeply, I changed my mind. Now that I'm eighteen, I decided what I should do. I want to be a firefighter. I think I'd be a good at this job for many reasons. Firstly,I like sports and physical education and I used to do a lot of physical exercise every day. I'm also quite sensible in dangerous situations and my teacher say I'm really reliable person. I've also decided that I don't want to work indoors like my mother. I'd prefer to work outside because it's more interesting. I also don't mind if I don't earn a lot of money, like a doctor does! To sum up, I'm really looking forward to becoming firefighter. You need to be hard-working but I'm prepared for this. Sometimes it will be a dangerous job, but I'm ready for that challenge. I know that the training is going to take a long time but it will be worth it.
Roger & Oscar

Bernat bloc said...

I often think about what kind of job I would like to do after I leave school. In the past, I used to want to be a doctor like my mother. Then, after thinking about this more deeply, I changed my mind. Now that I am eighteen, I have decided what I should do. I want to be a firefighter.

I think I'd be good at this job for many reasons. Firstly, I like sports and physical education and I used to do a lot of physical exercices every day. I'm also quite sensible in dangerous situations and my teachers say I'm a reliable person. I've also decided that I don't wont to work indoors like my mother. I would prefer to work outside because it's more interesting. I also don't mind if I don't earn a lot of money, like a doctor does!

To sum up, I'm really looking forward to becoming a firefighter. You need to be hard-working but I'm prepared for this. Sometimes it will be a dangerous job, but I'm ready for that change. I know that the training will take a long time but it will be worth it.

Bernat and Joan G.

Rubén Esteban said...

Adrià and Rubén
I often think about what kind of job I would like to do after I leave school. In the past, I used to want to be a doctor like my mother. Then, after thinking about this more deeply, I changed my mind. Now that I am eighteen, I have decided what I should do. I want to be a firefighter.

I think I'd be good at this job for many reasons. Firstly, I like sports and physical education and I used to do a lot of physical exercices every day. I'm also quite sensible in dangerous situations and my teachers say I'm a reliable person. I've also decided that I don't wont to work indoors like my mother. I would prefer to work outside because it's more interesting. I also don't mind if I don't earn a lot of money, like a doctor does!

To sum up, I'm really looking forward to becoming a firefighter. You need to be hard-working but I'm prepared for this. Sometimes it will be a dangerous job, but I'm ready for that change. I know that the training will take a long time but it will be worth it.

rafa prieto said...

I ofen think about what kind of job i would like to do after i live school. In the past i used to wont to be a doctor like my mother. Then, after thinking abaut this more deeply, i changed my maind. Now that i am 18, i have decided what i shout do. I wont to be a firefighter.
I think i'd be good at this job for many reasons. Firstly, i like sports and fisical education and i'm yust to do it a lot of fisical exercises every day. I'm olso quite sensible in dangerous situations and my teachers say i'm a reliable person. I have olso decided that i don't want to work in doors like my mother. I would prefer to work outsite becouse it is more interesting. I aolso don't mind if i don't earn a lot of money, like a doctor does.
To sum up, i'm really looking forward to becoming a firefighter. You need to be hard-working but I'm prepared for this. Somtimes it will be a dangherous job, but i am ready for that challenge. I know that the training isgoing to takea long time but it will be worthit.

IVAN ALMECIJA 1999 said...

I often think about what kind of job I would like to do after I leave school. In the past, I used to want to be a doctor like my mother. Then, after thinking about this more deeply, I changed my mind. Now that I am eighteen, I have decided what I should do. I want to be a firefighter.

I think I'd be good at this job for many reasons. Firstly, I like sports and physical education and I used to do a lot of physical exercices every day. I'm also quite sensible in dangerous situations and my teachers say I'm a reliable person. I've also decided that I don't wont to work indoors like my mother. I would prefer to work outside because it's more interesting. I also don't mind if I don't earn a lot of money, like a doctor does!

To sum up, I'm really looking forward to becoming a firefighter. You need to be hard-working but I'm prepared for this. Sometimes it will be a dangerous job, but I'm ready for that change. I know that the training will take a long time but it will be worth it.
Xavier Ortega and Iván Almécija

IVAN ALMECIJA 1999 said...

I often think about what kind of job I would like to do after I leave school. In the past, I used to want to be a doctor like my mother. Then, after thinking about this more deeply, I changed my mind. Now that I am eighteen, I have decided what I should do. I want to be a firefighter.

I think I'd be good at this job for many reasons. Firstly, I like sports and physical education and I used to do a lot of physical exercices every day. I'm also quite sensible in dangerous situations and my teachers say I'm a reliable person. I've also decided that I don't wont to work indoors like my mother. I would prefer to work outside because it's more interesting. I also don't mind if I don't earn a lot of money, like a doctor does!

To sum up, I'm really looking forward to becoming a firefighter. You need to be hard-working but I'm prepared for this. Sometimes it will be a dangerous job, but I'm ready for that change. I know that the training will take a long time but it will be worth it.
Xavier Ortega and Iván Almécija

Pau Salvador Zamora said...

I often thing about what kind of job I would like to do after school. In the past, I used to want to be a doctor like my mother. Then, after thinking about this more deeply, I changed my mind. Now that I'm eighteen, I hace decided what I should do. I want to be a firefighter.
I think I'd be good at this job for many reasons. Firstly, i like sports and physical education and I'm used to doing a lot of physical exercise every day. I'm also quite sensible in dangerous situations and my teachers say I'm a realible person. I've also decided that I don't want to work indoors like my mother. I would prefer to work outside because it's more interesting. I also don't mind if I don't earn a lot of money, like a doctor does!
To sum up, i'm really looking forward to becoming a firefighter. You need to be hard-working but i'm prepared for this. Sometimes it will be a dangerous job, but I am ready for the challenge. I know that the training is going to take a long time but it will be worth it.

Anonymous said...

Carlos Marín and Laia Sanchez:

I often think about what kind of job I would like to do after I leave school. In the past, I used to want to be a doctor like my mother.Then, after thinking about this more deeply, I changed my mind. Now that I am eighteen, I have decided what I should do.
I want to be a firefighter.

I think I'd be good at this job for many reasons. Firstly, I like sports and physical education and I used to do a lot of physical exercices every day. I'm also quite sensible in dangerous situations and my teachers say I'm a reliable person. I've also decided that I don't wont to work indoors like my mother. I would prefer to work outside because it's more interesting. I also don't mind if I don't earn a lot of money, like a doctor does!

To sum up, I'm really looking forward to becoming a firefighter. You need to be hard-working but I'm prepared for this. Sometimes it will be a dangerous job, but I'm ready for that change. I know that the training will take a long time but it will be worth it.

Rosana Contreras said...

I often think about what kind of job I would like to do after I leave school.
In the past, I used to want to be a doctor like my mother.
Then, after thinking about this more deeply, I changed my mind.
Now that I'm eighteen, I haved decided what I should do.
I want to be a firefighter.
I think I'd be good at this job for many reasons. Firstly, I like sports and physical education and I'm used to doing a lot of physical exercice every day.
I'm also quite sensible in dangerous situation and my teachers say I'm a reliable person.
I've also decided that I don't want to work indoors like my mother.
I would prefer to work outside because it's more interesting.
I also don't mind if I don't earn a lot of money, Like a doctor does!
To sum up, I'm really looking forward to becoming a firefighter.
You need to be hard-working buy I'm prepared for this.
Sometimes, I will be a dangerous job, but I'm ready for that challenge. I knou that the training is going to take a long time but it will be worth it.

Amira said...

I often think about what kind of job I would like to do after I leave school. In the past I used to want to be a doctor like my mother. Then, after thinking about this more deeply, I changed my mind. Now that I'm eighteen, I have decided what I should do. I want to be a firefighter.

I think I'd be good at this job for many reasons. Firstly, I like sports and physical education and I'm used to doing a lot of physical exercise every day. I'm also quite sensible in dangerous situations and my teachers say that I'm reliable person. I have also decided that i don't want to work indoors like my mother. I would prefer to work outside because it's more interesting. I also don't mind if I don't earn a lot of money, like a doctor does!

To sum up, I'm really looking forward to becoming a firefighter. You need to be hard working but I'm prepare for this. Sometimes it will be dangerous job, but I am ready for that challenge. I know that the training is going to take a long time but it will be worth it.

Amira & Laia

Maria said...

JARA Y MARIA
I often think about what kind of job i'd like to do after i leave school. In the past, i'm used to went to be a doctor like my mother. Then, after thinking about this more deeply, i changed my mind. Now that i am 18, i have decided what i should do. I want be a firefighter.
I think i would be good at this job for many reasons. Firstly, i like sports and physical educations and i'm used to doing a lot of physical exercice every day. I'm also quite sensible in dangerous situations and my teachers say i'm a realiable person. I have also decided that i don't want to work indoors like my mother. I'd prefer to work outside because is more interesting. I also don't mind if i don't earn a lot of money, like a doctor does.
To sum up, i'm really looking forward to becoming a firefighter. You need to be hard-working but i'm prepared for this. Sometimes it would be a dangerous job but i'm ready for that change. I know that the training going to take a long time but it will be worth it.

Anna Serra said...

I think about what kind of job I would like to do affter I leave school. In the past, I used to want to be a doctor like my mother. Then, affter thinking about this more deply, I changed my mind. Now the I'm eighteen I have decided I what I shold do. I want to be a firefighter.
I think I'd be good at this job for many reasons. Firstly, I like sports and physical education and I'm used to doing a lot of physical exercices every day. I'm also quite sensible in dangerous situations and my teachers say I'm a reliable person. I've also decided that I don't to want work indors like my mother. I would preffer to work outsite because it's more interesting.I also don't mind if I don't eran a lot of money, like a doctor does!
To sum up,I'm really looking forward to becoming a firefigther. You need to be hard working but I'm preparet for this. Sometimes it will be a dangerous job, but I'm ready for the challenge I now that the traning go to taking a long time but it will be worth it.